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 #+DESC: A rather long essay on how to use Git in a civilized way
 
 * Rational                                                              :Git:
-The ability of making tools and using them is one of the many things that differentiates
-us from other animal species and the skills to use tools properly in what makes some of us
+The ability of making tools and using them is one of the many things that makes us special
+and the skills to use tools properly in what makes some of us
 elites.
 
 As software engineers, interacting with [[https://git-scm.com/][Git]] is an important part of our daily life. These days